moon connection

Sunday, August 13, 2006

I am a big reader, and LOVE learning new things...

To all who love the language

This year's 10 winners of the Bulwer-Lytton contest, aka "Dark and Stormy Night Contest" (run by the English Dept. of San Jose State University) wherein one writes only the first line of a bad novel:
10) "As a scientist, Throckmorton knew that if he were ever to break wind in the echo chamber, he would never hear the end of it.
"9) "Just beyond the Narrows, the river widens.
"8) "With a curvaceous figure that Venus would have envied, a tanned, unblemished oval face framed with lustrous thick brown hair, deep azure-blue eyes fringed with long black lashes, perfect teeth that vied for competition, and a small straight nose, Marilee had a beauty that defied description.
"7)"Andre, a simple peasant, had only one thing on his mind as he crept along the East wall: 'Andre creep... Andre creep... Andre creep.'
"6) "Stanislaus Smedley, a man always on the cutting edge of narcissism, was about to give his body and soul to a back alley sex-change surgeon to become the woman he loved."
5)"Although Sarah had an abnormal fear of mice, it did not keep her from seeking out a living at a local pet store."
4) "Stanley looked quite bored and somewhat detached, but then penguins often do."
3) "Like an over-ripe beefsteak tomato rimmed with cottage cheese, the corpulent remains of Santa Claus lay dead on the hotel floor.
"2) "Mike Hardware was the kind of private eye who didn't know the meaning of the word 'fear'; a man who could laugh in the face of danger and spit in the eye of death -- in short, a moron with suicidal tendencies."AND THE WINNER IS
...1) "The sun oozed over the horizon, shoved aside darkness, crept along the greensward, and, with sickly fingers, pushed through the castle window, revealing the pillaged princess, hand at throat, crown asunder, gaping in frenzied horror at the sated, sodden amphibian lying beside her, disbelieving the magnitude of the frog's deception, screaming madly, 'You lied!"

GREAT LITERARY TAUNTS"I feel so miserable without you, it's almost like having you here." -- Stephen Bishop
A modest little person, with much to be modest about." --- Winston Churchill (about Clement Atlee)
"I've just learned about his illness. Let's hope it's nothing trivial." --- Irvin S. Cobb
I have never killed a man, but I have read many obituaries with great pleasure."--- Clarence Darrow
He has never been known to use a word that might send a reader to the dictionary."--William Faulkner (about Ernest Hemingway)
"He is not only dull himself, he is the cause of dullness in others." --- Samuel Johnson
He had delusions of adequacy."--- Walter Kerr
"I've had a perfectly wonderful evening. But this wasn't it."--- Groucho Marx
"They never open their mouths without subtracting from the sum of human knowledge." --- Thomas Brackett Reed My personal favorite!!!
"He loves nature in spite of what it did to him." --- Forrest Tucker
I didn't attend the funeral, but I sent a nice letter saying I approved of it." --- Mark Twain
"His mother should have thrown him away and kept the stork." --- Mae West

5 Comments:

  • At 10:59 AM, Blogger Tramp said…

    Hey, I can do that!

    I looked in the mirror and thought, “That can’t be me. What the hell happened?”. I’d taken on a grotesque, unrecognizable appearance. It didn’t look like me but I was the one standing in front of the mirror. How did this happen? When did this happen? Just then, I heard a man call out, “Hey buddy, you have to leave now. The funhouse is closed.”

     
  • At 2:26 PM, Blogger Carrie said…

    now that is a GOOD one

     
  • At 10:51 PM, Blogger Tramp said…

    You said that was good. So on your opinion, I forwarded to the University. I am now entered into their contest and have become pen pals with professor Rice, the head of the English Dept. at San Jose State University and am having all of my writing critiqued by same.

    Thanks, I think?

     
  • At 3:13 PM, Blogger Tramp said…

    Now Gene and I are on a first name basis. He seems to be a great guy, 65 years old and about to retire.

     
  • At 6:08 AM, Blogger Carrie said…

    As soon as he retires, you and he can set up camp in the lake home, and make gallons of the fine brew and tweak your natural writing ability.

     

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